Non technical founder and wanted full creative freedom on how we design our landing page. It’s still a work in progress but the inspiration is for each page to be like a vintage pin ball machine with its own unique navigation path to tell its story..

Does not work so great on mobile. Site content just scales down to a small unreadable text.

Most of your uses will visit on mobile

As mentioned text size is a problem. Sadly just about everything else is too. The text is so woolly it could be a sheep for all I know. You need real benefits to gain attention. What do your potential customers really need?

The artwork is inoffensive but like the text it says little and mostly just makes things look messy.

I would start again by asking "If I was customer x what would catch my attention as something that would be an obvious benefit". And leave anything else out.

Sorry if this is a bit brutal - maybe I'm in a bad mood!

This is a genuinely interesting concept and it feels unique.

After exploring the site (i literally had to go to all the pages to get what the site is for), i had to really try to understand the core use or meaningfulness of the site as the presentation makes it harder to absorb. There’s a lot of dense text, so adding clearer visual hierarchy or a few concrete examples could help people understand the value much faster.

Also, as already pointed out, it is not responsive on mobile. Some buttons only click on specific parts, which might be an HTML/container issue. Then there is no navbar so moving between pages feels a little confusing. And having “Legal” appear as a primary button is a bit unexpected to me

It just feels like the presentation needs a bit of polish so the product can shine through more clearly and the message clearly communicated.