This would have been more effective if written by hand. The issue content is typical LLM-generated markdown that has a lot of noise (formatting, headings, lists etc.) which makes it fatiguing to read. It comes across like a PowerPoint deck of dense slides. What is really needed is a clear, focused and well-written letter that effectively gets across a message and has the potential to be persuasive to the people within Microsoft who might be in a position to help. An additional problem with the LLM-written style is that it comes across as low-effort, which also lessens its impact.