It feels inorganic. Like this person has sat down and thought "how can I become an influencer on HN" it's disturbing.
If you read the post and actually believed what it said, you would tell people "your presentation convinced but did not persuade, that's why leadership isn't doing what you said." This doesn't make sense to a typical English speaker.
This article can be re-written into something < 300 words.
That's the sort of sloppiness you get when you have a conversation with an AI, ask the AI to make a blog post based on the conversation, and then copy-paste that straight into your Substack without reading to see if a fresh reader would understand what you are talking about.
If the author insists on posting more unedited AI text, asking a fresh AI session to critique the post from scratch would probably catch this kind of mistake and lead to a much better result.
put very succinctly. if done without ai, the more impressive!
nubg•1h ago
getnormality•1h ago