I read the first version and thought the first half was good and that the second half felt clunky. To the point where i don’t recommend it to anyone (not a huge negative, there’s just better books out there).
> The second half was garbage, but the first half was so good
so you had the same reaction?
I think I wanted to alert? No inform somebody about something.
Mh don't know.
Hey it's really warm outside happy spring
dinkleberg•35m ago