This. I don't particularly like the LLM writing style, but we've read a ton of very poorly written texts over the year with no complaints. LLMs are average writers with an annoying style, but not bad writers. If the content is good, I don't care if a LLM wrote it.

The writing style is this staccato LLM-like style that is difficult to read as it has zero flow and meaningless sentences.

Like what does the second sentence even mean? Is it even a sentence? "The roofline math, the prompt-processing catch, the NPU red herring, and the owner-measured speeds."